The amount of typos contained in the last post bothers me – really highlights the need to hire someone else to do this kind of thing.
Thankfully my agent finally read this and decided to inform me in case the errors were not poetic license. They were not and have now been corrected. I will accept my thirty lashes tied to the main sail now.
I would rather be censored
than
accepted.
I would rather be shot
than
mediocre.
the platitudes of willful resemblance 
say something